- From: Samuel Weiler <weiler@w3.org>
- Date: Sat, 25 Sep 2021 08:22:21 -0400 (EDT)
- To: public-payments-wg@w3.org
Received on Saturday, 25 September 2021 12:22:25 UTC
As feedback on the draft charter: I suggest reordering the "out of scope" section to highlight the punch line. Here is a proposed rewrite, that puts the definitions after the punch line. Alternatively, you could define these terms elsewhere in the doc: "How digital payment schemes register and communicate with payment instruments. (Here, a "digital payment scheme" is a set of rules for the execution of payment transactions that are followed by adhering entities (payment service providers, processors, issuers, acquirers, payers and payees). A payment instrument is an account, token, or other means of fulfilling the payment provider¢s role in a digital payment scheme. Some digital payment schemes make internal use of payment instruments from other payment schemes.)"
Received on Saturday, 25 September 2021 12:22:25 UTC