Re: ACTION STRONGLY ENCOURAGED: Flows ready for wider review

Hi.
some minor comment.

Font is very difficult to read.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/tef21w2qm4cwl4l/%EC%8A%A4%ED%81%AC%EB%A6%B0%EC%83%B7%202016-02-02%2011.08.08.png?dl=0

need to use different font and background color


On Tue, Feb 2, 2016 at 5:13 AM, Telford-Reed, Nick <
Nick.Telford-Reed@worldpay.com> wrote:

> Hi everybody
>
> The flows task force have been doing an amazing job documenting and
> editing a series of payment flows to be used by the wider working group.
>
> You can find all the flows work documented on the wiki:
> *https://github.com/w3c/webpayments/wiki/Flows*
> <https://github.com/w3c/webpayments/wiki/Flows>
>
> And the source files are here:
> *https://github.com/w3c/webpayments/tree/gh-pages/PaymentFlows*
> <https://github.com/w3c/webpayments/tree/gh-pages/PaymentFlows>
>
> The first set are ready for wider review by the WG:
>
>    - Credit/Debit/Charge Cards *Standard*
>    <http://www.plantuml.com/plantuml/proxy?fmt=svg&src=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/w3c/webpayments/gh-pages/PaymentFlows/Card/MerchantHosted-CardPayment-Current.pml>*,
>    **3DS*
>    <http://www.plantuml.com/plantuml/proxy?fmt=svg&src=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/w3c/webpayments/gh-pages/PaymentFlows/Card/MerchantHosted-CardPaymentwith3DS-Current.pml>*,
>    **Tokenisation*
>    <http://www.plantuml.com/plantuml/proxy?fmt=svg&src=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/w3c/webpayments/gh-pages/PaymentFlows/Card/MerchantHosted-CardPaymentwithTokenisation-Current.pml>
>    - Author: mattsaxon
>    - *SEPA Credit Transfer*
>    <http://www.plantuml.com/plantuml/proxy?fmt=svg&src=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/w3c/webpayments/gh-pages/PaymentFlows/CreditTransfer/WebInitiatedSEPACreditTransfer-Current.pml>
>    - Authors: cyrilvignet & mattsaxon
>    - *Masterpass*
>    <http://www.plantuml.com/plantuml/proxy?fmt=svg&src=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/w3c/webpayments/gh-pages/PaymentFlows/AlternativePayment/MasterPassStandardCheckout-Current.pml>
>    - Author: laurentcastillo
>    - *Realtime Payment*
>    <http://www.plantuml.com/plantuml/proxy?fmt=svg&src=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/w3c/webpayments/gh-pages/PaymentFlows/RealTime/RealTimePayments.pml>
>    - Author: vincentkuntz
>
> How to review them:
>
>    - The files can be rendered directly in a browser with no extensions
>    using a proxy service with the URL format as follows
>    *http://www.plantuml.com/plantuml/proxy?fmt=svg&src=[sourcefile]*
>    <http://www.plantuml.com/plantuml/proxy?fmt=svg&src=%5Bsourcefile%5D>:
>    extension of the PlantUML proxy for SVG output, courtesy of Shane McCarron.
>    This is how the links are presented above.
>    - Also a *Chrome extension*
>    <https://chrome.google.com/webstore/detail/plantuml-viewer/legbfeljfbjgfifnkmpoajgpgejojooj>
>    is available. This allows you when using Chrome to view a GitHub file to
>    view the diagrams by simply clicking on the ‘Raw’ button. For viewing local
>    files, you will need to enable that in the extension (paste this link into
>    Chrome chrome://extensions/ and tick ‘allow access to file URLs’)
>    - If you have problems with using local tools for authoring (e.g.
>    corporate policy), there is also a *Web interface*
>    <http://plantuml.com/plantuml> to author diagrams.
>
> We asked for volunteers at a previous WG meeting
> *https://www.w3.org/2016/01/07-wpwg-minutes.html#item03*
> <https://www.w3.org/2016/01/07-wpwg-minutes.html#item03>
>
> For the flows which are ready for review we had the following volunteers:
> Manu - Credit Card
> Ian - 3DS
> AdrianHB - 3DS
>
> Clearly, we need more volunteers, so if you are following on the mailing
> list, and are looking for a way into the conversation, please can I ask you
> to try to find an hour of your time to review these first 7 flows.
>
> You can contribute your comments directly in github with pull requests, or
> just capture your notes in an email to the list, but please spare us 60
> minutes of your time to start looking these over.
>
> Thanks
> Nick
>
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> Nick Telford-Reed
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