Re: OWL 2 Quick Reference Card

Michael

Thanks for the new comments. I have fixed them in the new attachment.

Jie

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Jie Bao
http://www.cs.rpi.edu/~baojie




On Fri, Oct 16, 2009 at 4:27 AM, Michael Schneider <schneid@fzi.de> wrote:
> Hi Jie!
>
> I have printed it with a color printer, and it looks good to me (and to the
> OWL-friendly colleague I met at the printer :)).
>
> A few more editorial points (all minor):
>
> * §1, introductory text, "... is a prefix name": the word "name" seems to be
> printed in a different font (monospaced) than the rest of the text (serif).
>
> * §1, introductory text, Consider removing the "_" in "prefix:local_name",
> i.e. maybe change to "prefix:localname". It might happen that people are
> mislead by the use of "_", since this letter is used in bNodes as well, and
> I don't see any advantage of having it.
>
> * §2.5, table on "Object Property Axioms", middle row, 2nd page: In all but
> two cases the argument list is in the second row. This is particularly odd,
> since FunctionalObjectProperty and IrreflexiveObjectProperty have it in the
> second row, while InverseFunctionalObjectProperty and
> ReflexiveObjectProperty have it in the first row. Consider using a common
> style.
>
> * §2.5, table on "Assertions", middle row: There is a line break in the
> middle of the terms "Negative(Object|Data)PropertyAssertion". This might be
> hard to fix. But you might consider using a smaller font in these particular
> cases? Or maybe you can play with the column width?
>
> * §2.6, table on "Declarations": In two cases, a line break after "("
> exists. Normally, you have put the whole argument list (starting with "(")
> in the second row. You should do it here as well IMO.
>
> Cheers,
> Michael
>
>>-----Original Message-----
>>From: public-owl-wg-request@w3.org [mailto:public-owl-wg-request@w3.org]
>>On Behalf Of Jie Bao
>>Sent: Thursday, October 15, 2009 11:07 PM
>>To: public-owl-wg
>>Subject: Re: OWL 2 Quick Reference Card
>>
>>Thank all for comments, please see attachment for the updated card.
>>
>>Changes
>>* Layout change per  Michael Schneider's suggestions [1]
>>* RDF Syntax=> RDF Syntax (Turtle)
>>* Add W3C copyright notice in Sandro's suggested form [2]
>>* Minor editorial change per Ankesh Khandelwal's comments (personal
>>communication)
>>
>>[1] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-owl-wg/2009Oct/0007.html
>>[2] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-owl-wg/2009Oct/0015.html
>>[3]
>>http://www.w3.org/2007/OWL/wiki/index.php?title=Quick_Reference_Guide&di
>>ff=25963&oldid=25955
>>
>>If no more comment comes into, Sandro will put them on
>>http://www.w3.org/2007/OWL/refcard
>>
>>Cheers
>>
>>Jie
>
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