- From: Víctor Rodríguez Doncel <vrodriguez@fi.upm.es>
- Date: Mon, 01 Dec 2014 11:53:35 +0100
- To: public-odrl@w3.org
- CC: vrodriguez@fi.upm.es
- Message-ID: <547C48AF.4030009@fi.upm.es>
Dear all, I have no major comments and agree with all the changes Víctor El 26/11/2014 12:42, Renato Iannella escribió: > These editorial comments are primarily aimed at aligning the ODRL > Ontology spec with the Common Vocabulary spec. > > 1 - Update title to "ODRL Version 2.1 Ontology" > > 2 - The "Offer", "Agreement", and "Offer and next Policy" scenario > examples need to update the pay duty to compensate and use a > constraint for the payAmount (not an asset) > > 3 - The "Multiple assets" scenario example needs to define > x:collection as a o:relation sub-property > > 4 - The "event" property also defines a specific value ("playUsage") - > need to add this > > 5 - All of the Actions need their definitions to be updated > (copy/paste from the Common Vocab document) as we have updated all the > definitions (from "grantUse" right up to "watermark") > > 6 - "aggregate", "annotate", and "anonymize" have Broader Term "use" > > 7 - deprecate "appendTo", "lease", "lend", "preview", "secondaryUse", > and "writeTo" > > 8 - deprecate "copy" and recommend to use "reproduce" > > 9 - "display" is not equivalent to "execute" (and vice-versa) > > 10 - deprecate "export" and recommend to use "transform" > > 11 - deprecate "license" and recommend to use "grantUse" > > 12 - "modify" is not equivalent to "derive" (and vice-versa) > > 13 - deprecate "pay" and recommend to use "compensate" > > 14 - "play" is not equivalent to "present" - "present" is a Broader Term > > 15 - "present" - move "play" from equivalent to narrower term > > 16 - add "transfer" and "use” actions (these need to be explicitly > defined in the Common Vocab as well) > > > Cheers... > Renato Iannella > Semantic Identity > http://semanticidentity.com > Mobile: +61 4 1313 2206 >
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