Re: AW: [all] call for consensus: publication of requirements as first public working draft

Hi Felix,
I had a quick scan last night. In general I think it looks good with the 
proviso of:
1) there are some ongoing actions with data category proposals from 
yves, tadaj, myself and others circulating via the list that are not yet 
in the document. But if they are still being discussed then we can leave 
them out for this version.
2) should we remove the interested person names from the data category 
table, and just record them on the separate assessment page.
3) you mention moving the end-to-end use case into section 2 - which 
would improve the flow The text could do with some improvement to 
communicate the use cases in a more accessible way, and to be more 
consistent with the prior definitions.
4) There are several direct links to other documents in the text, should 
these be put in as references?

If you can signal when you have done your changes, i can try and address 
these on the wiki version say on thursday evening before the HTML 
conversion. When do you need it frozen to do the HTML step?

cheers,
Dave



On 16/05/2012 13:43, Moritz Hellwig wrote:
>
> Hi Felix,
>
> for the first draft, this looks fine too me too.
>
> I’ve attached a diagram of the proposed metadata to this message, as I 
> find it easier to get an overview over what’s been proposed. I plan to 
> extend it regularly when things change or more information becomes 
> available the metadata. I’d like to add the diagram to the 
> requirements page if nobody has any objections.
>
>
> Cheers,
>
> Moritz
>
> *Von:*Yves Savourel [mailto:ysavourel@enlaso.com]
> *Gesendet:* Mittwoch, 16. Mai 2012 13:44
> *An:* 'Felix Sasaki'; public-multilingualweb-lt@w3.org
> *Betreff:* RE: [all] call for consensus: publication of requirements 
> as first public working draft
>
> Hi Felix,
>
> The current wiki draft looks fine to me for a first draft.
>
> Cheers,
>
> -yves
>
> *From:*Felix Sasaki [mailto:fsasaki@w3.org] 
> <mailto:[mailto:fsasaki@w3.org]>
> *Sent:* Tuesday, May 15, 2012 11:20 PM
> *To:* public-multilingualweb-lt@w3.org 
> <mailto:public-multilingualweb-lt@w3.org>
> *Subject:* [all] call for consensus: publication of requirements as 
> first public working draft
>
> All,
>
> this is call for consensus for publishing the requirements document
>
> http://www.w3.org/International/multilingualweb/lt/wiki/Requirements
>
> as a first public working draft. For those of you who are new to the 
> W3C process: we need a decision by the working group to publish the 
> draft under the "TR" directory
>
> http://www.w3.org/TR/
>
> this evening (European time) I will do the following:
>
> - Implement issue-10 in the draft
>
> https://www.w3.org/International/multilingualweb/lt/track/issues/10
>
> - generalize all comments like "ARLE: ..." to "working group comment: ..."
>
> - add a "status of the document" section at the top of the document
>
> - convert the document to HTML and send the so-called "transition 
> request".
>
> Please reply to this call for consensus if you have any concerns about 
> the publication. Of course the document still has issues. Note that 
> the publication will be a *first* public working draft, so we will 
> have plenty of opportunities to change things. Note also that 
> publishing asap is helpful for getting wider feedback, e.g. next week 
> at the LREC conference which some of us will attend. So if there are 
> no very severe issues, I encourage you to agree with the publication.
>
> Please give any feedback in this thread by tonight 11 p.m. CEST.
>
> Thanks,
>
> Felix
>
> -- 
> Felix Sasaki
>
> DFKI / W3C Fellow
>