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Re: [comment] Use cases and requirements for Media Fragments: Chapters 3, 4, 5

From: Silvia Pfeiffer <silviapfeiffer1@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 13 Apr 2009 16:57:46 +1000
Message-ID: <2c0e02830904122357k5faf3b99l33627a07519e7571@mail.gmail.com>
To: RaphaŽl Troncy <Raphael.Troncy@cwi.nl>
Cc: Media Fragment <public-media-fragment@w3.org>
Feedback from my changes...

2009/4/7 RaphaŽl Troncy <Raphael.Troncy@cwi.nl>:
> I do have some comments on the chapters you have edited:
> †- Could we use something else than <eg> for the scenarios? The problem is
> that <eg> forces the text to appear on a single line and we have now to
> scroll horizontally the bar to get the whole scenario. Can you fix that?

Done (I think you did it for me - thanks!).

> †- It seems to me that the first requirements from the scenarios are the
> four dimensions we are considering. Consequently, could we switch the
> sections 4 and 5, and first talk about the 4 dimensions, and then introduce
> these additional requirements.

Done as discussed in last meeting (thanks to you again :).

> †- Do we really want sub-section headings for the current section 4? Or
> could we live with a more structured list? Again, I'm looking for formatting
> that would improve the readability of the document.

Left them there for easier referencing.

> †- The section 5.5 is the most critical for me, since I believe the reader
> will *not* understand the fitness table! My suggestion is:
> † . emphasize the definition of 'fit', 'conditional' and 'unfit', using the
> <definition> element?


> † . replace the number in the table with these labels


> † . further structure the table by adding some headings, such as: video
> format, audio formats, image formats


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