- From: Raphaël Troncy <Raphael.Troncy@cwi.nl>
- Date: Mon, 13 Apr 2009 10:07:24 +0200
- To: Silvia Pfeiffer <silviapfeiffer1@gmail.com>
- CC: Jack Jansen <Jack.Jansen@cwi.nl>, Media Fragment <public-media-fragment@w3.org>
Dear Silvia, First, thanks for all the changes you made the last 24 hours, amazing! No, I take over for the next few hours :-) > On Wed, Apr 8, 2009 at 6:55 PM, Jack Jansen <Jack.Jansen@cwi.nl> wrote: >> I noticed a couple of things: >> 1. Of course, introduction needs to be written:-) > > Done now. Thanks, good intro, I have just rephrased some sentences that I had difficulty to read. >> Image is missing in section 4.1. Also: we should not depend on the image >> only to define the single-timeline (think of blind people), this section >> needs a few more lines/ > > Done and done. You had the image, but it was not visible in the HTML. I have corrected that. Raphaël -- Raphaël Troncy CWI (Centre for Mathematics and Computer Science), Science Park 123, 1098 XG Amsterdam, The Netherlands e-mail: raphael.troncy@cwi.nl & raphael.troncy@gmail.com Tel: +31 (0)20 - 592 4093 Fax: +31 (0)20 - 592 4312 Web: http://www.cwi.nl/~troncy/
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