[comment] Use cases and requirements for Media Fragments: Chapters 3, 4, 5

Dear Silvia,

I'm reading the latest version of 
http://www.w3.org/2008/WebVideo/Fragments/WD-media-fragments-reqs/ (xml 
file v1.27).

I do have some comments on the chapters you have edited:
   - Could we use something else than <eg> for the scenarios? The 
problem is that <eg> forces the text to appear on a single line and we 
have now to scroll horizontally the bar to get the whole scenario. Can 
you fix that?
   - It seems to me that the first requirements from the scenarios are 
the four dimensions we are considering. Consequently, could we switch 
the sections 4 and 5, and first talk about the 4 dimensions, and then 
introduce these additional requirements.
   - Do we really want sub-section headings for the current section 4? 
Or could we live with a more structured list? Again, I'm looking for 
formatting that would improve the readability of the document.
   - The section 5.5 is the most critical for me, since I believe the 
reader will *not* understand the fitness table! My suggestion is:
    . emphasize the definition of 'fit', 'conditional' and 'unfit', 
using the <definition> element?
    . replace the number in the table with these labels
    . further structure the table by adding some headings, such as: 
video format, audio formats, image formats

Cheers.

   Raphaël

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Received on Tuesday, 7 April 2009 13:13:15 UTC