- From: Thierry MICHEL <tmichel@w3.org>
- Date: Tue, 08 Feb 2011 12:16:02 +0100
- To: mcsuarez@fi.upm.es
- CC: "public-media-annotation@w3.org" <public-media-annotation@w3.org>
Mari Carmen, Thank you for your review. I have update the spec as follows. http://dev.w3.org/2008/video/mediaann/mediaont-1.0/mediaont-1.0.html Le 04/02/2011 14:53, Mari Carmen Suárez de Figueroa Baonza a écrit : > Dear Thierry, and all, > > here you can find my comments. > > abstract > - a core set of descriptive properties: this document defines --> "a > core set of descriptive properties. This document defines" Done > > introduction > - in the following "properties of our Ontology was selected", 'our > ontology' should be changed for 'Ontology for Media Resources 1.0' Done > > terminology > - "Ontology definition": are not limited to using RDF: implementations > MAY use --> are not limited to using RDF. Implementations MAY use Done > - "Media resource definition": is any physical or logical Resource that > can be --> is any physical or logical resource that can be Done > > acknowledgement > - member list should be updated (maybe including also my name, if you > consider it logic :-)). Added your name > > General: (across the document) > - The use of 'version 1.0' and '1.0' with respect to the Ontology for > Media Resources should be unified along the text, because sometimes is > used in the first form and other times in the latter one. Done > - Some times ontology appears in lower case and other times starting > with capital letter (e.g., second and third paragraph of the > introduction), this should be unified (to be used always the same form). I unified it. But is some cases the ontology should remain with a lower case, when it is use as a general case for ontology (not the Media Ontology). > - It should be clarify explicitly that "Media Ontology" and "Ontology > for Media Resources" are synonyms Added in 2 Conformance Requirements > - Different types of letters are used (e.g. for urls, see section 7.1). > This should be unified. Not sure what you mean ? > > Best Regards, > > Mari Carmen. > > Thierry MICHEL escribió: >> Hi all, >> >> Please review carefully the Ontology draft >> http://dev.w3.org/2008/video/mediaann/mediaont-1.0/mediaont-1.0.html >> >> >> This will be the *last chance* for edits before going to 2nd Last Call. >> >> During the next MAWG telecon, the group will take the decision to move >> to 2nd Last Call. >> >> Please report to the mailing list your feedback. >> >> Thierry. >> >> >
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