- From: Wonsuk Lee <wonsuk11.lee@samsung.com>
- Date: Fri, 23 Dec 2011 09:38:43 +0900
- To: "'Bailer, Werner'" <werner.bailer@joanneum.at>, '"Höffernig, Martin"' <Martin.Hoeffernig@joanneum.at>
- Cc: public-media-annotation@w3.org
Hi. Werner and Martin. It's really great job. Thanks a lot ;) Best regards, Wonsuk. > -----Original Message----- > From: Bailer, Werner [mailto:werner.bailer@joanneum.at] > Sent: Friday, December 23, 2011 3:33 AM > To: public-media-annotation@w3.org > Subject: Review of PR version of ontology document > > Dear all, > > Martin and I have reviewed the PR version of the document in the last > weeks. Here are comments on two topics: editorial issues in the document > and issues with the testsuite (summarised below, but Martin has already > posted them to the list). > > 1. Editorial comments about the ontology document > > - Veronique's affiliation in the editor list: VU is listed in the > acknowledgements and in the W3C member listing as "Vrije Universiteit" > - section 1 introduction > -- first par: "non available" -> "not available" > -- second par: "will introduce a certain loss in semantic", propose to > replace "will" by "may" > -- 2nd and 3rd bullet point on Dublin Core: remove "the" before "Dublin > Core" > - references to formats are inhomogeneous, sometimes uses square brackets, > sometimes not, e.g. "EXIF" vs. "[FRBR]" in section 1 > - section 1.1 > -- 3rd par: "they widespread use" -> "their ...", also their seems to > refer to tech properties, but could also read as referring to container > formats, this should be clarified > - section 1.1.1 > -- dig35, mrss and ogg include values in the examples, others not > - section 1.1.2 > -- ogg and webm include values in the examples, others not > -- missing example for flv > - section 3 / Property > -- Dublin Core should be a link to the reference > - section 4 > -- the first sentence of the note "Currently, ..." should be dropped > -- the second sentence of the note should be part of the text rather than > a note > - section 5.1.2 > -- copyright: the sentence "Other issues related to DRM ..." seems > outdated and should be changed, as policy allows referencing licenses > -- frameSize: "units MUST be interpreted as pixels" should probably say > "values ..." > -- compression: put mmyyyy under quotes or in italics > -- format: insert "/container types" after "bucket media types" > - section 5.2.1.1 > -- definition of more specific/generic: specific is defined as "contain a > superset of the semantics", generic as "semantics that is broader" -- this > is in fact the same. In accordance with the examples > -- generic vs. general: the definition uses the term "more generic", while > the mapping tables use "more general"; this should be harmonised (more > general seems to be better, as it corresponds to the term used by SKOS) > - section 5.2.2 > -- column "spec": the column is not present in any of the tables > (sometimes there is an untitled columns such as in CableLabs) > -- "into an updated of this" -> "into an updated version of this" > - MPEG-7 mapping table: > -- date: change the mapping type to "more specific" > -- policy: add to both the MPEG-7 and XPath columns "or > UsageInformation/Rights", change the mapping type to "more general" > - SMPTE DMS-1 mapping table: > -- date: change the mapping type to "more specific" > - section 6.1 > -- heading starts with "Example 1", in contrast to the headings of other > examples > -- section 6.2 > -- "not a use case that has been considered": "originally" should be > inserted, as this section actually considers the use case > - section 6.4 > -- first par: "gerenal" -> "general" > -- there is <tt></tt> markup throughout the section, which probably should > be formating rather than being verbatim code > - annex B references > -- the CR of the Media Fragment Spec should be referenced, and it should > not say "W3C Recommendation" as it does now > > 2. Issues in the test suite > > There are a few issues with the test suite files (e.g. RDF/XML was updated, > but Turtle version of the same file is outdated or missing). Martin has > reported these issues in the following mails to the group: > http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-media- > annotation/2011Dec/0032.html > http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-media- > annotation/2011Dec/0008.html > http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-media- > annotation/2011Dec/0007.html > http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-media- > annotation/2011Dec/0006.html > > For many of these issues, fixed version of the mentioned files have > already been posted to the list. > > Best regards, > Martin and Werner > > ----------------------------------------------------------------------- > Werner Bailer > Audiovisual Media Group > > DIGITAL - Institute of Information and Communication Technologies > > JOANNEUM RESEARCH Forschungsgesellschaft mbH > Steyrergasse 17, A-8010 Graz, AUSTRIA > > phone: +43-316-876-1218 personal fax: +43-316-876-91218 > mobile: +43-699-1876-1218 general fax: +43-316-876-1191 > web: http://www.joanneum.at/digital > e-mail: mailto:werner.bailer@joanneum.at > -----------------------------------------------------------------------
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