Re: [External Origin] Re: Draft messaging for upcoming release

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From: Angela Barker <angela.barker@ukg.com>
Date: Saturday, 2 November 2024 at 5:01 AM
To: Sheri Byrne-Haber <sheri@sheribyrne.com>, Jennifer Zhang <zhangjenniferx@gmail.com>, Stacey Swinehart <stacey.swinehart@gmail.com>
Cc: public-maturity@w3.org <public-maturity@w3.org>
Subject: Re: [External Origin] Re: Draft messaging for upcoming release
Thank you! Both of the letters read well, and the book sounds awesome. Great job on both! _______________________________ Angela Barker (she/her/hers), CPACC | Director, Accessibility | UKG Ultimate K
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Thank you! Both of the letters read well, and the book sounds awesome. Great job on both!

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From: Sheri Byrne-Haber <sheri@sheribyrne.com<mailto:sheri@sheribyrne.com>>
Date: Friday, November 1, 2024 at 3:23 PM
To: Angela Barker <angela.barker@ukg.com<mailto:angela.barker@ukg.com>>, Jennifer Zhang <zhangjenniferx@gmail.com<mailto:zhangjenniferx@gmail.com>>, Stacey Swinehart <stacey.swinehart@gmail.com<mailto:stacey.swinehart@gmail.com>>
Cc: public-maturity@w3.org<mailto:public-maturity@w3.org> <public-maturity@w3.org<mailto:public-maturity@w3.org>>
Subject: Re: [External Origin] Re: Draft messaging for upcoming release

Have resent just to your email
On 11/1/2024 3:16 PM, Angela Barker wrote:
Any chance someone could send the documents? The original email didn’t come through with them so it’s possible they got caught up in our security review. Maybe a second send would work.

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From: Jennifer Zhang <zhangjenniferx@gmail.com><mailto:zhangjenniferx@gmail.com>
Date: Friday, November 1, 2024 at 2:12 PM
To: Stacey Swinehart <stacey.swinehart@gmail.com><mailto:stacey.swinehart@gmail.com>
Cc: Sheri Byrne-Haber <sheri@sheribyrne.com><mailto:sheri@sheribyrne.com>, public-maturity@w3.org<mailto:public-maturity@w3.org> <public-maturity@w3.org><mailto:public-maturity@w3.org>
Subject: [External Origin] Re: Draft messaging for upcoming release
Thank you for these, Sheri! They look solid.
-Jennifer Z

On Fri, Nov 1, 2024 at 12:56 PM Stacey Swinehart <stacey.swinehart@gmail.com<mailto:stacey.swinehart@gmail.com>> wrote:
The content looks awesome!

I have a couple of minor grammar catches (Word might have already found these for you)

"For Wide Review: APA Group Note Accessibility Maturity Model 1.0"

  *   The last paragraph has extra spaces between periods and the first letter of the words in the following sentences.

The third doc, email draft:

  *   First sentence - missing a period
  *   Second paragraph - has an extra space after the period in the first sentence
  *   Fourth paragraph (after the bullet list in Overview) - has an extra space after the period in the first sentence
  *   Fifth paragraph (in seeking) - has an extra space after the period in the second sentence

Suggestion:

  *   For the items under "Comments" and "Please," use bullet list format instead.

Cheers!
ssg.



On Thu, Oct 31, 2024 at 6:08 PM Sheri Byrne-Haber <sheri@sheribyrne.com<mailto:sheri@sheribyrne.com>> wrote:
I've attached three documents for required messaging to release the
maturity model note based on the exemplars provided by Janina.

Please review before the meeting on the 6th, as we have a pretty tight
timetable to release by the 20th.

Thanks

Sheri