Re: [External Origin] Re: Draft messaging for upcoming release

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*Dr.  Keith Newton *(Call me "Dr. Keith")
Executive Leader and Strategic a11y in Digital Accessibility Experience
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On Sun, Nov 3, 2024 at 1:11 AM Neha Manik Jadhav <njadhav@helixopp.com>
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> Everything is sounding good!
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> NEHA JADHAV
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> Product Manager
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> *From: *Angela Barker <angela.barker@ukg.com>
> *Date: *Saturday, 2 November 2024 at 5:01 AM
> *To: *Sheri Byrne-Haber <sheri@sheribyrne.com>, Jennifer Zhang <
> zhangjenniferx@gmail.com>, Stacey Swinehart <stacey.swinehart@gmail.com>
> *Cc: *public-maturity@w3.org <public-maturity@w3.org>
> *Subject: *Re: [External Origin] Re: Draft messaging for upcoming release
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> Thank you! Both of the letters read well, and the book sounds awesome.
> Great job on both!
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> *_______________________________*
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> *Angela Barker (she/her/hers), CPACC | Director, Accessibility | UKG*
> Ultimate Kronos Group
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> M: +1 602 317 6737
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> *From: *Sheri Byrne-Haber <sheri@sheribyrne.com>
> *Date: *Friday, November 1, 2024 at 3:23 PM
> *To: *Angela Barker <angela.barker@ukg.com>, Jennifer Zhang <
> zhangjenniferx@gmail.com>, Stacey Swinehart <stacey.swinehart@gmail.com>
> *Cc: *public-maturity@w3.org <public-maturity@w3.org>
> *Subject: *Re: [External Origin] Re: Draft messaging for upcoming release
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> Have resent just to your email
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> On 11/1/2024 3:16 PM, Angela Barker wrote:
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> Any chance someone could send the documents? The original email didn’t
> come through with them so it’s possible they got caught up in our security
> review. Maybe a second send would work.
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> *_______________________________*
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> *Angela Barker (she/her/hers), CPACC | Director, Accessibility | UKG*
> Ultimate Kronos Group
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> M: +1 602 317 6737
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> Phoenix, Arizona
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> *UKG.com* <https://www.ukg.com/> *| Our purpose is people.*
> Follow UKG: LinkedIn <https://www.linkedin.com/company/ukg> | YouTube
> <https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCJZMTrZOfBMqMwuL4tfEsmQ> | Twitter
> <https://twitter.com/UKGInc>
> Follow me: LinkedIn <https://www.linkedin.com/in/angelakuwaye/>
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> *Chair of ADAPT (Accessibility and Disability Allies Partner Together)
> Employee Resource Group*
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> *From: *Jennifer Zhang <zhangjenniferx@gmail.com>
> <zhangjenniferx@gmail.com>
> *Date: *Friday, November 1, 2024 at 2:12 PM
> *To: *Stacey Swinehart <stacey.swinehart@gmail.com>
> <stacey.swinehart@gmail.com>
> *Cc: *Sheri Byrne-Haber <sheri@sheribyrne.com> <sheri@sheribyrne.com>,
> public-maturity@w3.org <public-maturity@w3.org> <public-maturity@w3.org>
> *Subject: *[External Origin] Re: Draft messaging for upcoming release
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> Thank you for these, Sheri! They look solid.
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> -Jennifer Z
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> On Fri, Nov 1, 2024 at 12:56 PM Stacey Swinehart <
> stacey.swinehart@gmail.com> wrote:
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> The content looks awesome!
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> I have a couple of minor grammar catches (Word might have already found
> these for you)
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> "For Wide Review: APA Group Note Accessibility Maturity Model 1.0"
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>    - The last paragraph has extra spaces between periods and the first
>    letter of the words in the following sentences.
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> The third doc, email draft:
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>    - First sentence - missing a period
>    - Second paragraph - has an extra space after the period in the first
>    sentence
>    - Fourth paragraph (after the bullet list in Overview) - has an extra
>    space after the period in the first sentence
>    - Fifth paragraph (in seeking) - has an extra space after the period
>    in the second sentence
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> Suggestion:
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>    - For the items under "Comments" and "Please," use bullet list format
>    instead.
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> Cheers!
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> ssg.
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> On Thu, Oct 31, 2024 at 6:08 PM Sheri Byrne-Haber <sheri@sheribyrne.com>
> wrote:
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> I've attached three documents for required messaging to release the
> maturity model note based on the exemplars provided by Janina.
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> Please review before the meeting on the 6th, as we have a pretty tight
> timetable to release by the 20th.
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> Thanks
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> Sheri
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