Re: [External Origin] Re: Draft messaging for upcoming release

Have resent just to your email

On 11/1/2024 3:16 PM, Angela Barker wrote:
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> Any chance someone could send the documents? The original email didn’t 
> come through with them so it’s possible they got caught up in our 
> security review. Maybe a second send would work.
>
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> *From: *Jennifer Zhang <zhangjenniferx@gmail.com>
> *Date: *Friday, November 1, 2024 at 2:12 PM
> *To: *Stacey Swinehart <stacey.swinehart@gmail.com>
> *Cc: *Sheri Byrne-Haber <sheri@sheribyrne.com>, public-maturity@w3.org 
> <public-maturity@w3.org>
> *Subject: *[External Origin] Re: Draft messaging for upcoming release
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> Thank you for these, Sheri! They look solid.
>
> -Jennifer Z
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> On Fri, Nov 1, 2024 at 12:56 PM Stacey Swinehart 
> <stacey.swinehart@gmail.com> wrote:
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>     The content looks awesome!
>
>     I have a couple of minor grammar catches (Word might have already
>     found these for you)
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>     "For Wide Review: APA Group Note Accessibility Maturity Model 1.0"
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>       * The last paragraph has extra spaces between periods and the
>         first letter of the words in the following sentences.
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>
>     The third doc, email draft:
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>       * First sentence - missing a period
>       * Second paragraph - has an extra space after the period in the
>         first sentence
>       * Fourth paragraph (after the bullet list in Overview) - has an
>         extra space after the period in the first sentence
>       * Fifth paragraph (in seeking) - has an extra space after the
>         period in the second sentence
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>
>     Suggestion:
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>       * For the items under "Comments" and "Please," use bullet list
>         format instead.
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>     Cheers!
>
>     ssg.
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>     On Thu, Oct 31, 2024 at 6:08 PM Sheri Byrne-Haber
>     <sheri@sheribyrne.com> wrote:
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>         I've attached three documents for required messaging to
>         release the
>         maturity model note based on the exemplars provided by Janina.
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>         Please review before the meeting on the 6th, as we have a
>         pretty tight
>         timetable to release by the 20th.
>
>         Thanks
>
>         Sheri
>