Thank you for these, Sheri! They look solid. -Jennifer Z On Fri, Nov 1, 2024 at 12:56 PM Stacey Swinehart <stacey.swinehart@gmail.com> wrote: > The content looks awesome! > > I have a couple of minor grammar catches (Word might have already found > these for you) > > "For Wide Review: APA Group Note Accessibility Maturity Model 1.0" > > - The last paragraph has extra spaces between periods and the first > letter of the words in the following sentences. > > > The third doc, email draft: > > - First sentence - missing a period > - Second paragraph - has an extra space after the period in the first > sentence > - Fourth paragraph (after the bullet list in Overview) - has an extra > space after the period in the first sentence > - Fifth paragraph (in seeking) - has an extra space after the period > in the second sentence > > > Suggestion: > > - For the items under "Comments" and "Please," use bullet list format > instead. > > > Cheers! > ssg. > > > > On Thu, Oct 31, 2024 at 6:08 PM Sheri Byrne-Haber <sheri@sheribyrne.com> > wrote: > >> I've attached three documents for required messaging to release the >> maturity model note based on the exemplars provided by Janina. >> >> Please review before the meeting on the 6th, as we have a pretty tight >> timetable to release by the 20th. >> >> Thanks >> >> Sheri >> >
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