Re: Draft messaging for upcoming release

The content looks awesome!

I have a couple of minor grammar catches (Word might have already found
these for you)

"For Wide Review: APA Group Note Accessibility Maturity Model 1.0"

   - The last paragraph has extra spaces between periods and the first
   letter of the words in the following sentences.


The third doc, email draft:

   - First sentence - missing a period
   - Second paragraph - has an extra space after the period in the first
   sentence
   - Fourth paragraph (after the bullet list in Overview) - has an extra
   space after the period in the first sentence
   - Fifth paragraph (in seeking) - has an extra space after the period in
   the second sentence


Suggestion:

   - For the items under "Comments" and "Please," use bullet list format
   instead.


Cheers!
ssg.



On Thu, Oct 31, 2024 at 6:08 PM Sheri Byrne-Haber <sheri@sheribyrne.com>
wrote:

> I've attached three documents for required messaging to release the
> maturity model note based on the exemplars provided by Janina.
>
> Please review before the meeting on the 6th, as we have a pretty tight
> timetable to release by the 20th.
>
> Thanks
>
> Sheri
>