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Re: ACTION-95 Review BP and Guidelines

From: Cody Burleson <cody.burleson@base22.com>
Date: Mon, 16 Dec 2013 12:44:24 -0600
Message-ID: <CAJM-RdpqZyk9mk1=BMoP3erBY_=61Yg1sj9hzGNVqqLSdEerCA@mail.gmail.com>
To: Nandana Mihindukulasooriya <nmihindu@fi.upm.es>
Cc: "public-ldp-wg@w3.org" <public-ldp-wg@w3.org>, Steve Speicher <sspeiche@gmail.com>
Hi, Nandana,

Could you let me know when you wrap up the current round of revisions? I
still have an Action to add some new commentary, but I'd rather just wait
for you.

 - Cody


On Mon, Dec 16, 2013 at 8:54 AM, Nandana Mihindukulasooriya <
nmihindu@fi.upm.es> wrote:

> Thank you SteveS for the review. We are now in the process of addressing
> the comments from you and Miguel in the BP document.
>
> Best Regards,
> Nandana
>
>
> On Thu, Dec 12, 2013 at 4:51 PM, Steve Speicher <sspeiche@gmail.com>wrote:
>
>> BP&G Editors,
>>
>> I did a review of the BP&G document per ACTION-95 and believe this
>> completes my action.
>>
>> I found it useful and easy to read.  I do not immediately see any missing
>> BP or G, though I'm going through a more detailed analysis of similar work
>> at OSLC and will suggest as the come up.
>>
>> Here are some comments from specific sections.
>>
>> #Abstract lower case the "I" in Implementing
>>
>> #2.2 One key motivating case for ensuring 'rdf:type' is explicitly set is
>> it helps greatly with efficient and useful queries, such as "Show me all
>> bugs that ..."
>>
>> #2.6 4th para "single document is a acceptable", remove extraneous "a"
>>
>> #2.8 This sentence isn't valid:
>>   "The Range column in the tables below identifies the recommended
>> rdfs:range for the properties."
>> it should be replaced with something such as:
>>    "The Range/Datatype column in the tables below identifies the
>> recommended rdfs:range or rdfs:datatype for the properties."
>>
>>   also should change heading "Range/DataType" to "Range/Datatype" in all
>> the table headings.
>>
>>   rdfs:label - the Comment is no longer valid.  Even though RDFS defines
>> this for use in vocabulary documents, it has become common practice in use
>> it as a general purpose label.  I'd suggest saying that: "A general purpose
>> label".
>>
>> Regards,
>> - Steve Speicher
>>
>
>


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