RE: Accepting changes to BP doc - BP 22

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Lieske, Christian [mailto:christian.lieske@sap.com] 
> Sent: 04 December 2007 07:47
> To: Richard Ishida
> Cc: public-i18n-its@w3.org
> Subject: RE: Accepting changes to BP doc - BP 22
> 
> Hi Richard,
> 
> Thanks for all of the edits.
> 
> Here are a couple of observations/remarks related to BP 22. 
> Despite of them, I would be alright with the edits you have done.
> 
> Cheers,
> Christian
> ==
> 
> 1. I would prefer to start the "Why do this" with the "If not 
> used properly" 
> rather than with types and implementations.

It is indeed more in keeping with the rest of the document to put the types and implementations info in the BP intro, rather than the why do this.  I moved it there.

> 
> 2. Revealing why types and implementations are mentioned 
> might be helpful. 
> >From my understanding, we mention the different types and 
> >implementations in
> order to allow authors to spot inserted text easily.

Given its new position, I think that is clear now.


> 
> 3. We could consider a note along the lines that for example 
> "automated text" 
> is used as a synonym in some contexts.

Hmm. Thinking...

> 
> 4. I wonder if the "However, such a construction has several 
> problems: " with all of the bullets should go into the 
> example 29 rather than living outside.

I don't think so, because these are generalisable reasons, but I will change the text to say 'at first glance this'-> 'at first glance the example above' 


RI
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: public-i18n-its-request@w3.org 
> [mailto:public-i18n-its-request@w3.org]
> On Behalf Of Richard Ishida
> Sent: Montag, 3. Dezember 2007 15:52
> To: public-i18n-its@w3.org
> Subject: Accepting changes to BP doc
> 
> 
> Having heard from no-one except Yves, I assume that you are 
> happy with the 
> proposed changes currently highlighted in the ITS BP 
> document. So to move 
> things along, I hereby give notice that if I hear nothing 
> more before then, 
> tomorrow morning, UK time, I will accept all marked changes 
> and all proposals 
> in notes.
> 
> Cheers,
> RI
> 
> ============
> Richard Ishida
> Internationalization Lead
> W3C (World Wide Web Consortium)
> 
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