[Bug 16221] New: editorial: "as such" doesn't fit

https://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=16221

           Summary: editorial: "as such" doesn't fit
           Product: HTML WG
           Version: unspecified
          Platform: All
        OS/Version: All
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: HTML5 spec author view
        AssignedTo: mike@w3.org
        ReportedBy: dsb@smart.net
         QAContact: public-html-bugzilla@w3.org
                CC: public-html-wg-issue-tracking@w3.org,
                    public-html@w3.org


In Abstract:

  "This document is an automated redaction of the full HTML5 specification. 
  As such, the two documents are supposed to agree on normative matters   
  concerning Web authors."

The "as such" doesn't quite fit there--the "two documents" are not "an
automated redaction"  (only one is such a thing as an automated redaction).

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Received on Sunday, 4 March 2012 13:43:26 UTC