- From: Dan Connolly <connolly@w3.org>
- Date: Fri, 16 Feb 2007 17:47:51 -0600
- To: rreck@rrecktek.com
- Cc: public-grddl-wg@w3.org
On Wed, 2007-02-07 at 10:55 -0500, Ronald P. Reck wrote: > http://www.w3.org/TR/grddl/ > > 1. > current>The use cases document[usecases] collects a number of use cases > together with their goals and requirements for GRDDL. > > rationale: my impression is that using both 'collect' and 'together' is > redundant. > > change>The use cases document[usecases] collects a number of use cases > with their goals and requirements for GRDDL. yes, this is an improvement. http://www.w3.org/2004/01/rdxh/spec 1.217 2007/02/16 23:46:08 My sense of style differs from yours on the other two; I didn't make those changes. > 2. > > current>XHTML provides the profile mechanism to link to the meaning of > properties and the set of legal values for those properties. > > rationale: stylistic > > change> XHTML provides the profile mechanism that link the meaning of > properties and the set of legal values for those properties. > > > 3. > > current> Those terms can then be used in an XHTML document to convey > profile-dependent meaning. > > rationale: stylistic > > change>Then, those terms can be used in an XHTML document to convey > profile-dependent meaning. > > -- Dan Connolly, W3C http://www.w3.org/People/Connolly/ D3C2 887B 0F92 6005 C541 0875 0F91 96DE 6E52 C29E
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