- From: Brian Suda <brian.suda@gmail.com>
- Date: Fri, 9 Feb 2007 16:44:07 +0000
- To: public-grddl-wg <public-grddl-wg@w3.org>
I have read through the Use-case document. I broke down my edits in 3 categories, 1) Things to still do 2) technical errors 3) grammar issues (feel free to pick and choose how/if you actually change these) @@'s that need completion: 1. Introduction: Data and Documents the GRDDL Primer Working Draft@@pubfix, Use case #1 See also: put projects and prototypes here. Use case #3 See also: put projects and prototypes here. Technical: Use case #8 If a page used extensions of HTML that the tidying tool did not recognized (e.g. RDFa "rel" attribute), these extensions were removed during the cleaning-up and thus lost for the GRDDL transformation. I'm not sure what is meant by the "rel" attribute. I am assuming it is the XSLT2 "role" attribute. Grammar: 1. Introduction: Data and Documents From: Some are more formally defined and others exhibit more loosely-couple semantics. to: Some are formally defined and others exhibit more loosely-couple semantics. having 'more' sounds like you are about to compare 'formally defined' with something else that doesn't follow. From: And how can software determine whether authors of each are in fact the same person? to: And how can software determine whether the authors of each are in fact the same person? Use case #3 From: Reviews published using hReview microformats can be discovered using existing search services. to: Reviews published using the [http://microformats.org/wiki/hreview hReview] microformat can be discovered using existing search services. Use case #4 From: She is concerned by the tension between on one hand the natural heterogeneity to: She is concerned by the tension between the natural heterogeneity From: Semantic Web technologies to allow here company to to: Semantic Web technologies to allow her company to I'm not sure exactly what the protocol from here is, do i wait to see if the author excepts the changes, then i give a "Thumbs-up" or "Thumbs-down" and/or do i wait until the other reviewers have put in their changes. Eitherway, assuming the changes are made it looks good to me. -brian -- brian suda http://suda.co.uk
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