RE: Revisions to UC32, UC33, & UC43

Thanks, Alejandra.

Andrea

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Andrea Perego, Ph.D.
Scientific / Technical Project Officer
European Commission DG JRC
Directorate B - Growth and Innovation
Unit B6 - Digital Economy
Via E. Fermi, 2749 - TP 262
21027 Ispra VA, Italy

https://ec.europa.eu/jrc/

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From: Alejandra Gonzalez-Beltran [alejandra.gonzalez.beltran@gmail.com]
Sent: 30 January 2019 11:34
To: PEREGO Andrea (JRC-ISPRA)
Cc: Alejandra Gonzalez-Beltran; public-dxwg-wg@w3.org
Subject: Re: Revisions to UC32, UC33, & UC43

Dear Andrea,

Thanks for letting me know - these editorial changes look good to me.

Best wishes,

Alejandra

On Wed, 30 Jan 2019 at 09:52, <andrea.perego@ec.europa.eu<mailto:andrea.perego@ec.europa.eu>> wrote:
Dear Alejandra,

As part of PR https://github.com/w3c/dxwg/pull/684 , containing editorial changes to the UCR document, I made some revisions to 3 of your use cases.

The PR has already been merged but, although the changes are mainly editorial, I would like to check if you're happy with my revisions.

You can see the current version here:

https://w3c.github.io/dxwg/ucr/#ID32

https://w3c.github.io/dxwg/ucr/#ID33

https://w3c.github.io/dxwg/ucr/#ID43

And here's the diff with the current PWD:

https://services.w3.org/htmldiff?doc1=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2FTR%2Fdcat-ucr%2F&doc2=https%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fdxwg%2Fucr%2F#ID32

https://services.w3.org/htmldiff?doc1=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2FTR%2Fdcat-ucr%2F&doc2=https%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fdxwg%2Fucr%2F#ID33

https://services.w3.org/htmldiff?doc1=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2FTR%2Fdcat-ucr%2F&doc2=https%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fdxwg%2Fucr%2F#ID43

Thanks in advance

Andrea

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Andrea Perego, Ph.D.
Scientific / Technical Project Officer
European Commission DG JRC
Directorate B - Growth and Innovation
Unit B6 - Digital Economy
Via E. Fermi, 2749 - TP 262
21027 Ispra VA, Italy

https://ec.europa.eu/jrc/

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The views expressed are purely those of the writer and may
not in any circumstances be regarded as stating an official
position of the European Commission.