Re: Revisions to UC32, UC33, & UC43

Dear Andrea,

Thanks for letting me know - these editorial changes look good to me.

Best wishes,

Alejandra

On Wed, 30 Jan 2019 at 09:52, <andrea.perego@ec.europa.eu> wrote:

> Dear Alejandra,
>
> As part of PR https://github.com/w3c/dxwg/pull/684 , containing editorial
> changes to the UCR document, I made some revisions to 3 of your use cases.
>
> The PR has already been merged but, although the changes are mainly
> editorial, I would like to check if you're happy with my revisions.
>
> You can see the current version here:
>
> https://w3c.github.io/dxwg/ucr/#ID32
>
> https://w3c.github.io/dxwg/ucr/#ID33
>
> https://w3c.github.io/dxwg/ucr/#ID43
>
> And here's the diff with the current PWD:
>
>
> https://services.w3.org/htmldiff?doc1=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2FTR%2Fdcat-ucr%2F&doc2=https%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fdxwg%2Fucr%2F#ID32
>
>
> https://services.w3.org/htmldiff?doc1=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2FTR%2Fdcat-ucr%2F&doc2=https%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fdxwg%2Fucr%2F#ID33
>
>
> https://services.w3.org/htmldiff?doc1=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.w3.org%2FTR%2Fdcat-ucr%2F&doc2=https%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fdxwg%2Fucr%2F#ID43
>
> Thanks in advance
>
> Andrea
>
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