A couple of edits to DWBP

Berna, Newton, Carol,

In preparing the doc for tomorrow's publication, I did the following:

1. Accepted Berna's pull request implementing the new sentences for the 
intro to meet Laurent Lefort's comment. 
https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-dwbp-comments/2017Jan/0018.html

2. Did a little native speaker polishing on the result, including moving 
the para about Linked Data. No substantive change, just a slight 
editorial clean up.

3. The Link Checker threw up a problem with the link to the Solid Earth 
Environment Grid. It was in the doc as a link to 
https://www.bodc.ac.uk/resources/products/web_services/ which is a UK 
thing, not the thing in the text which is http://www.seegrid.csiro.au/ 
so I've corrected that.

Also, there was a link to a Library of Congress page that persistently 
gave a 500 error (http://id.loc.gov/vocabulary/iso639-1.html) so I've 
done some Googling and ended up changing the URL to 
http://id.loc.gov/ontologies/iso639-1_Languages.html, which is in the 
references, and I updated the ref text 
https://www.w3.org/TR/2017/REC-dwbp-20170131/#bib-ISO639-1-LOC

Shout if these tweaks are unacceptable.

Cheers

Phil


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Received on Monday, 30 January 2017 12:34:08 UTC