- From: Annette Greiner <amgreiner@lbl.gov>
- Date: Fri, 26 Feb 2016 11:17:54 -0800
- To: public-dwbp-wg@w3.org
Thanks for looking at this, Antoine! This is a way more useful review than I could have done. -Annette On 2/26/16 9:27 AM, Antoine Isaac wrote: > Hi everyone, > > Today I got an action dwbp-ACTION-236: Review the vocabulary aspects > of bp9 > http://www.w3.org/2013/dwbp/track/actions/236 > > Actually I've done a bit more, i.e. check for both BP8 and BP9 at > http://w3c.github.io/dwbp/bp.html#VersioningInfo > because the example of one very much builds on the example of the > other, and the issues I've spotted apply to both. > I'm also extending my feedback as a general feedback on the data that > is in the example, i.e. how the vocabularies are used. > > 1. The namespaces MUST be documented somewhere, either at level of > individual BPs or the whole BP document. > Where are these elements coming from? > PAV refered is refered in BP8 (but not BP9 btw) > I cannot be sure where version:VersionedThing is coming from... > > > 2. version:VersionedThing is probably useless, and maybe even harmful. > What counts in the example is the concrete versioning statements in > the description, not the fact that something is declared as versioned. > Everything is potentially a versioned thing, I don't like our BPs to > make recommendation that would be suggesting extra statement on every > dataset for little added value. The BP can live very well without it. > It's a bit like prov:Entity. I actually dislike it a lot, because it > doesn't say anything on the typed resource. But I can see more reasons > to keep it. > There's also some apparent problem in the way it's used. timetable-001 > is an instance of version:VersionedThing, and timetable-002 is an > instance of version:Version? How come, given that both resources seem > quite analogous? > Given that there is uncertainty on the provenance of this class (see > point 1), I would strongly argue to remove all this altogether. > > > 3. OWL has owl:versionInfo, which should be used instead of pav:version. > I think I like using several properties from PAV, but the OWL > namespace is more 'W3C-official' than the PAV one. > And BP8 mentions explicitly OWL as a source of annotation properties > for versioning (but then it uses none in the example!) > > > 4. The dates are the same for dct:issued and dct:modified. This is not > wrong data: it actually occurs a lot. But for an example in a section > on time versioning, it kind of misses its point and may confuse readers. > > > 5. Because I still don't know what version:currentVersion really is, > I'd recommend to use something else. Or nothing: the fact that you've > used a pav:previousVersion statement from timetable-002 to > timetable-001 already gives one the version sequence one needs. > Relying only on one direction may seem counter-intuitive: to know > whether something is deprecated, one has to query for whether there is > another resource that points to it with pav:previousVersion. But in > fact the complexity of the querying is exactly the same, and there are > advantages: > - fewer statements in the data > - monotonicity: the statements for timetable-001 don't change > (note that this versioning pattern is the one of the W3C documents!) > > Now there's another question about this: whether to use > pav:previousVersion or a Dublin Core property, dct:isVersionOf. The > definition of pav:previousVersion is semantically more precise, > because it links to the version that directly precedes the version > being described. while dct:isVersionOf can link to any earlier > version. But I expect that in practice dct:isVersionOf will point only > to the one previous version. And DC is an official standard, while PAV > is not (yet?). > > > Finally a couple of editorial comments: > - there are many spaces missing in the data, e.g. > "dct:publisher:transport-agency-mycity ;" > - I'm missing something in the sentence that finishes with " doesn't > exist on the timetable-001.". Like, something that defines what > timetable-001 is - as the wording assumes the reader is already > familiar with it. > > I hope this helps, > > Antoine > -- Annette Greiner NERSC Data and Analytics Services Lawrence Berkeley National Laboratory
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