Minor changes for your consideration

Dear editors,

As individual e-mails show, I've been addressing the feedback from 
Annette and Antoine following my suggestions yesterday. So the changes 
in my latest pull request are:


1. Intro text amended in line with Annette's desire for more explicit 
references to the Web.

2. As part of that, I added in a new sentence: "However, this growth is 
not consistent in style and in many cases does not make use of the full 
potential of the Open Web Platform's ability to link one fact to 
another, to discover related resources and to create interactive 
visualizations."

3. I also added a reference to the Open data Barometer as well as the 
Open Knowledge index.

4. Use persistent URIs as identifiers of datasets - How to Test section 
slightly reworded in line with Annette's suggestions.

5. Choose the right formalization level - amended in line with Antoine's 
comments on yesterday's amendments.

6. Amended reference to ODRL to use ReSpec's own library rather than the 
local bibliography.

Diff visible at
http://services.w3.org/htmldiff?doc1=http%3A%2F%2Fw3c.github.io%2Fdwbp%2Fbp.html&doc2=http%3A%2F%2Fphilarcher1.github.io%2Fdwbp%2Fbp.html


I just have one more section to look at today - data preservation.

Cheers

Phil.


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Phil Archer
W3C Data Activity Lead
http://www.w3.org/2013/data/

http://philarcher.org
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Received on Thursday, 28 April 2016 09:28:22 UTC