DWBP Introduction suggested changes...

Introduction suggestions.


Eric S


Introduction



*Data consumers (who may also be producers themselves) want to be able to
find and use data, especially if it is machine readable, accurate,
regularly updated, and has a guaranteed availability.*



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down “available at all times” to guaranteed availability.



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*Without this agreement, data publishers and consumers are faced with the
dilemma of how to fulfill each other’s needs.*



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*In like manner, from a consumer perspective, developers need guidance to
develop robust technology for consuming data that better ensures integrity
and reliability to support their applications.  In general users need
common methodologies to assess data quality, share usage experiences, and
convey successful approaches that others can leverage. *



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consumer perspective is also needed to help balance  the text.