DWBP Abstract comments....

I'm going through the BP document [1] section by section.  Here are my
comments for the abstract.

If there is a better way I can contribute comments please let me know.

Thanks,

Eric S



Abstract Comments and Suggested Changes

*1: “This document provides best practices related to the publication and
usage of data on the Web designed to help support a self-sustaining
ecosystem.”*

No changes just comments for sentence 1:  Loved the first sentence
particularly the term “self-sustaining ecosystem”, this concept to me
embodies the concept of   making the web data more valuable to the world
community than it is today.



2: “*Data should be published, discovered and understood by humans and
machines.”*

Suggested changes for sentence 2:  I recommended changing the second
sentence to underscore producing and consuming data can be done by machines
and humans.



3*:  “**Publishers should make data discoverable and when reused consumers
should acknowledge the data publisher. “*



Suggested changes for sentence 3:  I had to read this sentence several
times before I felt like like I understood the intent.  I recommended the
above rewording to make it a bit clearer, hopefully the original meaning
was changed.



4:  *In short, following these best practices will facilitate a more
enhanced interaction between publishers and consumers of data on the Web.*



Suggested changes for sentence 4:  Just tweaked the wording bits here,
emphasizing a promised advancement in the way people interact with the data.



References

[1] http://w3c.github.io/dwbp/bp.html