- From: Max Froumentin <maxfro@opera.com>
- Date: Fri, 18 Dec 2009 16:57:40 +0100
- To: "Nilsson, Claes1" <Claes1.Nilsson@sonyericsson.com>
- CC: "public-device-apis@w3.org" <public-device-apis@w3.org>
Hi Claes, On 18/12/2009 15:31, Nilsson, Claes1 wrote: > Hi Max, > > I appreciate your work on this specification. Took a quick look at the draft and I have some immediate comments: > > 3.2: Same comment as Robin had for "Contacts". We can only have normative statements for User Agents so normative statements for "recipients of system information" are out of scope. I suggest that you make this section informative. Fixed. > 4.8: The internal temperature can be expressed in degrees Celcius but the Ambient Temperature is expressed as value between 0 and 1. Which is the motivation for this? That was a mistake. Now corrected: ambient temperature is indeed in degrees. > 4.9 and 5: Is the intention that the "PropertyTemplate" is to be used for extensions, i.e. vendor-specific properties? If so I suggest that the text in section 4.9 is placed within section 5 and that it is stated that the property template is informative. I must have left templates (which were there purely for editorial convenience) lying around in a previous version of the draft, but I thought I'd removed them. Can you still see them? > I will come when I have reviewed the draft more thoroughly. Glad you like it! Max.
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