Re: Drafty VCTF Use Cases

Thanks for your comments Steven.  I have made your corrections in a branch
that I will merge up once we are ready for a new review cycle.

On Mon, Mar 7, 2016 at 10:20 PM, Steven Rowat <steven_rowat@sunshine.net>
wrote:

> On 3/7/16 3:15 PM, Shane McCarron wrote:
>
>> But the draft use-cases are up at
>> http://w3c.github.io/webpayments-ig/VCTF/use-cases/
>>
>
>
> Not much to complain about!  :-)
> FWIW, Comments:
>
> 3.1 How a Verifiable Claim Might be Created
> 3.2 How a Verifiable Claim Might be Used
>
> Both graphics, following the steps, worked smoothly for me. Nice.
>
> 4.1.2 Credential Verifiability
> Contains typo with redundant words “is a”:
> Eunice…..Her government issued identity certificate is a is acceptable, as…
>
> And also IMO best to add hyphen for the compound adjective
> “government-issued”, so correct sentence to:
>
> “Her government-issued identity certificate is acceptable, as…”
>
> 4.3.3 Pseudo-Anonymity
> “...encourages free discussion about issues controversial in Freedonia.”
>
> IMO this example treads a fine line and does it well: makes it clear what
> the mechanism will be without presenting a high-stress (or otherwise
> potentially frightening) scenario. Good job in a tricky situation!   :-)
>
>
> Steven Rowat
>
>


-- 
-Shane