Comments on draft charter [Was: Agenda: Verifiable Claims Teleconference - Tuesday, March 8th 2016]

> On Mar 7, 2016, at 6:54 PM, Manu Sporny <msporny@digitalbazaar.com> wrote:
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> 1. Draft Charter Proposal[1]

Hi Manu,

Here are some comments on the draft charter [1].

Ian

[1] http://w3c.github.io/vctf/charter/proposal.html

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* The section titled “Goals” does not really express any goals. I think it’s important to state them clearly.
  I also suggest deleting the first paragraph or moving to the ‘About this charter” section.

* "The findings suggest that there is consensus to address a @@@narrow set of use cases@@@“
 I believe that is a contentious statement and suggest that it be replace by:

   “The Web Payments Interest Group recommended that the task force draft a charter to determine
    whether there is consensus within the community (including those interviewed) for the scope of work.

* I think you can delete "Development of this charter was supported in part by the European Union's 7th Research Framework
   Programme (FP7/ 2013-2015) under grant agreement nº611327 - HTML5 Apps.”

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