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Short list for Verifiable Claims docs

From: David Ezell <David_E3@VERIFONE.com>
Date: Wed, 15 Jun 2016 14:12:32 +0000
To: Web Payments IG <public-webpayments-ig@w3.org>, "Credentials Community Group" <public-credentials@w3.org>
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Hi Folks:
I've only done a brief review.  I intend to reread in more depth.  The following two things popped out in my first skim.

1)      "Demonstration of Support for Verifiable Claims Working Group"


The document has this sentence:

3 large multinational for-profit corporations with revenues in the multiple billions of dollars per year in revenue stated that the work should be incubated further before entering the standardization process.

This sounds a bit combative.  Maybe something like "Three long-term W3C members have suggested that the work should be..." could be more appropriate.

2)      "Verifiable Claims Working Group Primer"


In the document, this sentence appears:

"The Credentials Community Group, Verifiable Claims Task Force, and Web Payments Interest Group have performed..."

Might be more accurate as:

"The Credentials Community Group and the Verifiable Claims Task Force of the Web Payments Interest Group have performed..."

Best regards,
Received on Wednesday, 15 June 2016 14:13:09 UTC

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