Short list for Verifiable Claims docs

Hi Folks:
I've only done a brief review.  I intend to reread in more depth.  The following two things popped out in my first skim.


1)      "Demonstration of Support for Verifiable Claims Working Group"

http://w3c.github.io/webpayments-ig/VCTF/support/

The document has this sentence:

3 large multinational for-profit corporations with revenues in the multiple billions of dollars per year in revenue stated that the work should be incubated further before entering the standardization process.

This sounds a bit combative.  Maybe something like "Three long-term W3C members have suggested that the work should be..." could be more appropriate.

2)      "Verifiable Claims Working Group Primer"

http://w3c.github.io/webpayments-ig/VCTF/primer/

In the document, this sentence appears:

"The Credentials Community Group, Verifiable Claims Task Force, and Web Payments Interest Group have performed..."

Might be more accurate as:

"The Credentials Community Group and the Verifiable Claims Task Force of the Web Payments Interest Group have performed..."

Best regards,
David