Re: Suggestion: use simple time-flow example as Architecture Block Diagram

On 6/13/16 9:19 AM, Dave Longley wrote:
> On 06/12/2016 07:55 PM, Steven Rowat wrote:
>> On 6/12/16 8:04 AM, msporny@digitalbazaar.com wrote:
>>> Topic: Discuss purpose of architecture proposal
>>>
>>> Adam Lake: http://w3c.github.io/webpayments-ig/VCTF/architecture/
>>> Adam Lake: Long form version,
>>>
>>> https://github.com/WebOfTrustInfo/ID2020DesignWorkshop/raw/master/topics-and-advance-readings/a-self-sovereign-identity-architecture.pdf
>>>
>>>
>>> Manu Sporny:  We're putting this proposal together because a
>>>   number of people at W3C requested it. This arch doc is here to
>>>   quickly inform people about the type of arch we're talking about.
>>
>> I'd like to suggest a change of the basic architecture 'block diagram'.
>>
>> I believe it will be easier to follow, and be more meaningful to a new
>> reader, if it is presented as a 'flow diagram' that includes time.
>>
>> I suggest as an example of what I mean, that steps like the ones below,
>> for a simple Credential creation and check, could be blocks, possibly
>> set up left-to- right or top-to-bottom for the flow of time:
>
> Here's another take on the diagram. This may not be quite what you're
> asking for -- but please provide feedback:
>
> https://docs.google.com/drawings/d/1M2cfMOCbXmMhg8Ar2YeCiRhMsJK-hzkCf1L_hJKMOHY/edit?usp=sharing
>


Dave,
Thanks for doing this. I'll note off the top that I woke up last night 
at 3 a.m. and had a vision of what the diagram could look like, with 
all the time-flow steps and taking into account the Entities (real and 
virtual) of: Subject, Holder, Issuer, Repository, and Relaying Party, 
and the Documents (fixed statements) of Claim and Credential.

This took half an hour to take shape in my mind, and then I dictated a 
description of it. I'm committed to making my imagined version of the 
diagram myself (I've done a lot of computer technical drawing in my 
life, but none for several years, and would enjoy the challenge at 
this point.)

About yours: it's nothing like mine at all. :-)

Although technically interesting to have the diagram change and show 
steps in sequence like that, with due respect, I found it just as 
confusing. And I don't know if it's wise to introduce that technology 
anyway for a mission-critical diagram -- it may not work for some people.

If I may, I'll make mine and send a link. Would a Drop-box link work? 
Or is sending as an attachment better?

And I can do any common graphic file format -- png, svg, jpg, pdf, 
etc. If you have a preference let me know.

I'm going to transcribe my last-night's dictation today and probably 
start making the diagram, but I might as well delay sending until I 
get the results of the voting for terminology, which I should use in it.

Steven

Received on Monday, 13 June 2016 16:53:15 UTC