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Re: Suggestion for grammatical improvement ( LC-2809)

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Date: Sun, 22 Sep 2013 14:46:17 +0000
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To: harry.loots@ieee.org
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 Dear harry.loots@ieee.org,

The Web Content Accessibility Guidelines Working Group has reviewed the
comments you sent [1] on the Last Call Working Draft [2] of the Techniques
for WCAG 2.0 published on 11 Jul 2013. Thank you for having taken the time
to review the document and to send us comments!

The Working Group's response to your comment is included below.

Please review it carefully and let us know by email at
public-comments-wcag20@w3.org if you agree with it or not before 2 Oct
2013. In case of disagreement, you are requested to provide a specific
solution for or a path to a consensus with the Working Group. If such a
consensus cannot be achieved, you will be given the opportunity to raise a
formal objection which will then be reviewed by the Director during the
transition of this document to the next stage in the W3C Recommendation
Track.

Thanks,

For the Web Content Accessibility Guidelines Working Group,
Michael Cooper
W3C Staff Contact

 1. http://www.w3.org/mid/E1V9B7u-00045q-CJ@tibor.w3.org
 2. http://www.w3.org/WAI/GL/2013/WD-WCAG20-TECHS-20130711/


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Your comment on G8: Providing a movie with extended audio descriptions:
> Name: Harry Loots
> Email: harry.loots@ieee.org
> Affiliation: EPO
> Document: TD
> Item Number: G8
> Part of Item: Applicability
> Comment Type: editorial
> Summary of Issue: Suggestion for grammatical improvement
> Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
> Sentence described in proposed change contains grammatical error. See
> below:
> 
> Proposed Change:
> Current text:
> An alternate version of an online video of a family escaping from a
> burning building, there is a continuous dialogue between the husband and
> wife about where the children are. 
> 
> Suggested change:
> delete {An} 
> insert {In an}
> New text:
> [begin add]In an[end add] [begin delete]An[end delete] alternate version
> of an online video of a family escaping from a burning building, there
> is a continuous dialogue between the husband and wife about where the
> children are. 
> 
> Alternative to suggested change is to substitute  [,] with [:]


Working Group Resolution (LC-2809):
Thank you for your comment.  Since this is representing an equivalent of
the video your latter suggestion with the colon makes more sense and we
will make the change.

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