\"Item Number\': Abstract. clarify with commas

Name: Shawn Henry for EOWG
Email: shawn@w3.org
Affiliation: W3C WAI EOWG
Document: W2
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Comment Type: editorial
Summary of Issue: \"Item Number\': Abstract. clarify with commas
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
current wording: \"Guidance about satisfying the Success Criteria in specific technologies as well as general information about interpreting the Success Criteria are provided in separate documents.\" 

suggested revision: add commas

rationale: makes this sentence easier to parse.



Proposed Change:
\"Guidance about satisfying the Success Criteria in specific technologies, as well as general information about interpreting the Success Criteria, are provided in separate documents.\"

Received on Saturday, 2 February 2008 19:27:20 UTC