set of Web pages - unnecessarily convoluted

Name: Patrick H. Lauke
Email: redux@splintered.co.uk
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Document: W2
Item Number: Appendix A: Glossary
Part of Item: 
Comment Type: editorial
Summary of Issue: set of Web pages - unnecessarily convoluted
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
\"and that are created...organization\"



sounds awkward, not always true - thinking of multi-author environments - and addressed if my previous point is considered (limiting the set of Web page to the same site)

Proposed Change:
remove entire \"and that are created...organization\" sentence

Received on Saturday, 2 February 2008 02:44:15 UTC