a voice easy to understand (G 1.1)

Name: Masahiro Hori
Email: horim@res.kutc.kansai-u.ac.jp
Affiliation: Kansai University
Document: UW
Item Number: Understanding Guideline 1.1 
Part of Item: Intent
Comment Type: editorial
Summary of Issue: a voice easy to understand (G 1.1)
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):


\"spoken in a voice that is easy to understand,\" 



This guideline should specifically focus on perceivable presentation of information rather than its understandability that is a primary focus of Principle 3.  In that sense, it should be possible to reword the above phrase \"spoken in a voice that is easy to hear\", but it seems to be odd and redundant within the original sentence.  So, it would be better simplify the phrase. 



Proposed Change:
Simply change to \"spoken in a voice\"

Received on Friday, 1 February 2008 17:59:44 UTC