Name: Patrick H. Lauke
Document: W2
Item Number: Statement of partial conformance
Part of Item: 
Comment Type: editorial
Summary of Issue: immediately?
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
In point 1, I think the two instance of \"immediately\" are simply unrealistic. What is \"immediately\"? It\'s just not possible.

Proposed Change:
either remove the two instances of \"immediately\", or change wording to something more realistic (\"within a reasonable timescale\"?)

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