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awkward phrasing

From: WCAG 2.0 Comment Form <nobody@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 1 Feb 2008 15:19:19 +0000 (GMT)
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Name: Patrick H. Lauke
Email: redux@splintered.co.uk
Document: W2
Item Number: Statement of partial conformance
Part of Item: 
Comment Type: editorial
Summary of Issue: awkward phrasing
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
awkward phrasing

Proposed Change:
\"...article that allows users to add comments, or applications...\" (remove \"to the bottom\", which is irrelevant)

\"...such as portals and news sites, or sites that automatically insert content from other sources over time.\"
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