Name: Patrick H. Lauke Email: redux@splintered.co.uk Affiliation: Document: W2 Item Number: Success Criterion 1.4.7 Part of Item: Comment Type: editorial Summary of Issue: Clarification of note / awkward phrasing Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change): \"one quarter as loud\" sounds stilted. also, the note may benefit from being prefaced by something like \"In simple terms,\" or \"As a rough measure,\" or \"As a rule of thumb,\"... Proposed Change: Preface note with \"In simple terms,\" or \"As a rough measure,\" or \"As a rule of thumb,\" followed by \"sound that meets this requirement will be approximately four times quieter than the foreground speech content.\"Received on Friday, 1 February 2008 00:35:42 UTC
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