- From: Loretta Guarino Reid <lorettaguarino@google.com>
- Date: Sat, 3 Nov 2007 19:30:46 -0700
- To: "Wayne Dick" <wed@csulb.edu>
- Cc: public-comments-WCAG20@w3.org
Dear Wayne Dick, Thank you for your comments on the 17 May 2007 Public Working Draft of the Web Content Accessibility Guidelines 2.0 (WCAG 2.0 http://www.w3.org/TR/2007/WD-WCAG20-20070517/). The WCAG Working Group has reviewed all comments received on the May draft, and will be publishing an updated Public Working Draft shortly. Before we do that, we would like to know whether we have understood your comments correctly, and also whether you are satisfied with our resolutions. Please review our resolutions for the following comments, and reply to us by 19 November 2007 at public-comments-wcag20@w3.org to say whether you are satisfied. Note that this list is publicly archived. Note also that we are not asking for new issues, nor for an updated review of the entire document at this time. Please see below for the text of comments that you submitted and our resolutions to your comments. Each comment includes a link to the archived copy of your original comment on http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-comments-wcag20/, and may also include links to the relevant changes in the WCAG 2.0 Editor's Draft of May-October 2007 at http://www.w3.org/WAI/GL/WCAG20/WD-WCAG20-20071102/ Thank you for your time reviewing and sending comments. Though we cannot always do exactly what each commenter requests, all of the comments are valuable to the development of WCAG 2.0. Regards, Loretta Guarino Reid, WCAG WG Co-Chair Gregg Vanderheiden, WCAG WG Co-Chair Michael Cooper, WCAG WG Staff Contact On behalf of the WCAG Working Group ---------------------------------------------------------- Comment 1: Accessibility Support of Web Technologies: The presentation is unnecessarily difficult. Source: http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-comments-wcag20/2007Jun/0315.html (Issue ID: 2170) ---------------------------- Original Comment: ---------------------------- Accessibility supported is very tricky. I think that this first presentation is to strained. Problem 1: The barrier is not clear Problem 2: The concept of accessibility supported is tangled with it relationship to conformance to WCAG 2.0 success criteria. This makes both more difficult to understand. Problem 3: The criteria for including a Web technology in a list of is a complex conditional with two parallel outer clauses. The inner clauses are not stated in a parallel format reducing readability. Problem 4: The second class of Accessible Supported Technologies - those that are supported by a widely distributed user agent seems ambiguous. Consider this example. I use a combination of reading assistants to read. I do not use Jaws, because many of the features distract me. Now if a Web technology was supported by JAWA (which is widely distributed - and remember AT is a UA) but not my system or reading assistants would I have to buy JAWS or learn the interface of the free version just to access that resource. To me that seems disproportionately difficult for me, but where is the line. Did you mean that. Did you mean mainstream user agent. It is not clear, even in the precise List membership criteria "an accessibility supported user agent is widely available".. (don't trust my quote exactly.) My solution to 1-3 below does not address the Problem 4 - my ambiguity issue. Now I tried to read it and translate it faithfully. I moved some notes into the text. See my rewrite in the proposed change below. If my interpretation is wrong then consider the fact that a mathematician and computer science professor read this carefully and got it wrong. A garden variety web developer may not have a chance. Now I tried to read it and translate it faithfully. I moved some notes into the text. If my interpretation is wrong then consider the fact that a mathematician and computer science department professor read this carefully and got it wrong. A garden variety web developer may not have a chance. Proposed Change: I have rewritten it at: http://www.csulb.edu/~wed/eo/accsup.html I stripped off the W3 logo, but kept the document style to keep the context. EOWG found it too long to discuss today, so they had me send it along directly. I think you can benefit from some of the wording and organization. The original was quite difficult for me and my PhD is in mathematics. --------------------------------------------- Response from Working Group: --------------------------------------------- The URL provided did not work. But we took your comments and reworked the conformance section to reflect them. Problem 1 was addressed by pulling information together and providing links to Understanding Conformance. Problem 2 was addressed by putting the "accessibility supported" aspect into a single item in conformance with definitions and Understanding Accessibility Supported" to back it up. Problem 3 was addressed by simplifying the definition list and formatting it better and having parallel structure. Problem 4 was addressed in the Understanding Conformance writeup. ---------------------------------------------------------- Comment 2: Notes 1 and 2 on the Assistive Technology Definition Source: http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-comments-wcag20/2007Jun/0316.html (Issue ID: 2171) ---------------------------- Original Comment: ---------------------------- In Note 1, your distinction of mainstream user agent reads like it is circular. It is not circular, but it takes two readings to realize it. Note 2 seems related to Note 1 so I combined them. Proposed Change: New Combined Note 1 and Note 2 into New: Note 1: The distinction between mainstream user agents and assistive technologies is real but not absolute. Many mainstream user agents provide some features to assist individuals with disabilities. These features are native assistive technologies contained within the mainstream user agent. The basic difference is that mainstream user agents target broad and diverse audiences that usually include people with and without disabilities. Assistive technologies target narrowly defined populations of users with specific disabilities. The assistance provided by an assistive technology is more specific and appropriate to the needs of its target users. --------------------------------------------- Response from Working Group: --------------------------------------------- We have combined the notes, to read: Note: The distinction between mainstream user agents and assistive technologies is not absolute. Many mainstream user agents provide some features to assist individuals with disabilities. The basic difference is that mainstream user agents target broad and diverse audiences that usually include people with and without disabilities. Assistive technologies target narrowly defined populations of users with specific disabilities. The assistance provided by an assistive technology is more specific and appropriate to the needs of its target users. The mainstream user agent may provide important services to assistive technologies like retrieving Web content from program objects or parsing markup into identifiable bundles. ---------------------------------------------------------- Comment 3: Accessible Technology Source: http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-comments-wcag20/2007Jun/0328.html (Issue ID: 2183) ---------------------------- Original Comment: ---------------------------- This is a redefinition based on POUR. EO may have submitted this. They assigned it to me, and at the end of the meeting this morning, I was a little confused as what I should send alone and what Judy would sent. So you might want to do a quick compare with what EO sent over for changes to assistive tecnology. We thought splitting out target audience from the use made it easier to read -Though I'm not married to the exact wording. I really think defining AT in terms of POUR Principles really takes better advantage of the conceptual foundation WCAG 2.0 has developed. Proposed Change: Look at http://www.csulb.edu/~wed/eo/assistive.html --------------------------------------------- Response from Working Group: --------------------------------------------- We have made a number of changes to the definition of assistive technology to improve clarity. We believe these changes address the substance of the issue you were raising and therefore did not adopt the exact wording proposed.
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