Present more techiques on how improve texts

Name: Magnus Burell
Email: magnus.burell@verva.se
Affiliation: Verva
Document: W2
Item Number: Success Criterion 3.1.5
Part of Item: 
Comment Type: technical
Summary of Issue: Present more techiques on how improve texts
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
To make the guideline more understandable, present more techiques on how to do this and give further advise on how to test it.

Proposed Change:
For example:

Sufficient techique: Try writing the most important first. Not only in the summary, also in the text as a whole and in separate sentences. It would support the reader’s ability to choose if och if not to continue reading.



Advisory Techique: An enumeration with more than four posts should be written as a list. This makes it easier to get an overview of the page. For example ”bananas, apples, pineapples, peaches, mangos” could be easier to read formattes as a li-list in HTML:

•	bananas

•	apples

•	pineapples

•	peaches

•	mangos

Received on Friday, 29 June 2007 12:16:07 UTC