Replace example 4

Name: Inclusion Europe
Email: self-advocacy@inclusion-europe.org
Affiliation: 
Document: UW
Item Number: Understanding Success Criterion 3.1.5
Part of Item: Examples
Comment Type: technical
Summary of Issue: Replace example 4
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
The Microsoft Word Readability Scores for the text provided in the example 4 (Starting with \"In a dazzling and dramatic portrait...\") show a Flesch-Kinkaid score of 9.9 and not of 6.9 as mentioned in success criterion 3.1.5. The example should be replaced. On the website www.inclusion-europe.org, there are plenty of texts and publications with a Flesch-Kinkaid score lower than 7. Any of them can be used as example.

Proposed Change:
Change example text in success criterion 3.1.5. On the website www.inclusion-europe.org, there are plenty of texts and publications with a Flesch-Kinkaid score lower than 7. Any of them can be used as example.

Received on Friday, 29 June 2007 10:56:23 UTC