Re: working on the image - try 2

Nice example - here are a few suggestions to make it even better:
Suggested navigation bar:

  * Home - offer a simple way to get back to the beginning;
  * Categories - this seems to be more about different categories
    (friendship is misspelled)
  * Delivery - keep it simple and consistent; not necessary to specify
    "information" as every section contains information; but if there
    are different delivery or other options, that is different
  * Events
  * Contact - keep it simple and consistent; not necessary to specify "us"

Please avoid using a white background (especially with dark/black text) 
as that challenges certain people with Dyslexia, light sensitivity, 
Irlen Syndrome, etc.

Red (hues) should only be used sparingly for emphasis or else it is 
essentially shouting (between visually off-putting to sensory overload) 
at the site visitor; using red/dark pink for a large footer area is 
visually excessive against all the flowers in red/pink and also does not 
have enough contrastto (and neutralizes) the pink flowers bordering it

For easier/quicker comprehension (and visual appeal); better to just 
have "Locally Sourced" and "Fresh Cut Daily" in large text instead of 
phrasing as a sentence

Not sure of the rationale for identifying the expected time to order - 
if it really take 10 minutes (typo), that is not an effective process so 
could scare away the customer especially one with different abilities 
who may need even longer.

Hope this helps~

*From:* Lisa Seeman []
*Sent:* Tuesday, February 16, 2021, 8:38 AM
*To:* public-cognitive-a11y-tf
*Subject:* working on the image - try 2

> Hi Folks
> Here is the edits without the valentine's day section. It looks a bit 
> better.
> Do we want to move ahead or leave it for the web version
> image.png

Received on Wednesday, 17 February 2021 03:36:58 UTC