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Fwd: first comments from my editorial pass

From: Lisa Seeman <lisa1seeman@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 10 Nov 2020 17:35:07 +0200
Message-ID: <CAKExBMJHs59j-NuLXBWSz1trNHEULArAbrXmfu2RoGrARHLkVQ@mail.gmail.com>
To: public-cognitive-a11y-tf <public-cognitive-a11y-tf@w3.org>
Hi Folks

I am not sure i like success examples and failure examples using the words =
"use" and avoid"

They give the expectation of a complete list and not an example



Maybe we should try another term, or make the examples more complete (this =
may delay publication but are more likely to be testable)




   - Use needs should be written consistently
   - words like symbols and icons are consistent
   - can we have a tick and cross next to "use" and "aviod"
   - make the discption of the pattern bold or have an icon next to the
   discription of each pattern such as =3D> (done better)













All the best

Lisa Seeman

http://il.linkedin.com/in/lisaseeman/, https://twitter.com/SeemanLisa
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v><div><br></div><div>Maybe we should try another term, or make the example=
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n><br></li><li><span>make the discption of the pattern bold or&nbsp; have a=
n icon next to the main discription of each pattern such as =3D&gt; (done b=
etter)</span><br></li></ul><div><br></div><div><br></div><div><br></div><di=
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