rewording of SC

Hi Folks

I have been working on rewording success criteria, with a lot of help so far from Mary Jo, Rich and my college Sharon Snider at IBM


I think some of them are done, so take a look if your success criteria as new proposed wording, and also please comment on any proposed new wording,
 


ONLY look at ones marked done or done-ish. (I might still change the ones marked done-ish but I think only slightly)
Do not comment on the formatting. I know it needs work, and will get to it in the end - but it is too complex to maintain it in drafts as people use different tools. 


https://rawgit.com/w3c/coga/master/extension/rewroded%20sc%203.html


FYI I am weighting for new wording from Katie, Mike and Steve

All the best

Lisa Seeman

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