- From: Rochford, John <john.rochford@umassmed.edu>
- Date: Tue, 9 Aug 2016 11:46:40 +0000
- To: "lisa.seeman" <lisa.seeman@zoho.com>, public-cognitive-a11y-tf <public-cognitive-a11y-tf@w3.org>
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Hi Lisa, My suggestions are to substitute: · “common” for “in general use”, i.e., “Choose words that are common for the context.” · change “difficult” for “harder”, i.e., “… or is found in user tests to make the content difficult to understand.” John John Rochford<http://profiles.umassmed.edu/profiles/display/132901> UMass Medical School/E.K. Shriver Center Director, INDEX Program Instructor, Family Medicine & Community Health www.DisabilityInfo.org Twitter: @ClearHelper<https://twitter.com/clearhelper> Confidentiality Notice: This e-mail message, including any attachments, is for the sole use of the intended recipient(s) and may contain confidential, proprietary, and privileged information. Any unauthorized review, use, disclosure, or distribution is prohibited. If you are not the intended recipient, please contact the sender immediately and destroy or permanently delete all copies of the original message. From: lisa.seeman [mailto:lisa.seeman@zoho.com] Sent: Monday, August 08, 2016 10:21 AM To: public-cognitive-a11y-tf <public-cognitive-a11y-tf@w3.org> Subject: change of wording Hi Folks I wanted to change the wording of Choose words that are in general use for the context. Use word or phrase from the most commonly used 3000 words, unless this will result in a loss of meaning. to Choose words that are in general use for the context. Use words or phrases that are used more frequently, unless this will result in a loss of meaning or is found in user tests to make the content harder to understand. Is this Ok? Lisa
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