change of wording

Hi Folks

I wanted to change the wording of 


Choose words that are in general use for the context. Use word or phrase from the most commonly used 3000 words, unless this will result in a loss of meaning. 


to


Choose words that are in general use for the context. Use words or phrases that are used more frequently, unless this will result in a loss of meaning or is found in user tests to make the content harder to understand. 


Is this Ok?


Lisa