Joshue O Connor suggestion

Joshue O Connor suggested the following change. 

 3.5.1 The success or failure of every action should be clearly indicated to the user and visual rapid feedback should be available. Spoken feedback should be a user selectable option.
 Would be better as. 
 3.5.1 The success or failure of every action should be clearly indicated to the user in an accessible feedback loop. 
 The term 'accessible feedback loop'  could be defined in the notes or understanding section? 
 This would cover multi modal access etc for all disability types. 
I am not sure it is simpler -what does everyone else think
All the best
Lisa