Re: EO's Preety script: COGA input needed by 9/15 at 6pm ET

Following up on this email (and not sure where Julie is with the
conversations with EO, so please ignore if not helpful).

I see no reason why Preety even needs to be child. Why not make her a
graduate student, instead? Nearly everything can remain the same, though
maybe "mom" should be "roommate."

Making her a graduate student also reinforces that individuals with
dyslexia and ADHD can also be intelligent and competent.

On Thu, Sep 15, 2022 at 3:58 PM Julie Rawe <jrawe@understood.org> wrote:

> We will still suggest it, yes.
>
> On Thu, Sep 15, 2022 at 6:16 AM Lisa Seeman <lisa1seeman@gmail.com> wrote:
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>> Can we suggest the scenario for lueise we created? It was so much more
>> positive.
>>
>> On Wed, Sep 14, 2022 at 8:33 AM Julie Rawe <jrawe@understood.org> wrote:
>>
>>> Hi, folks, this is the first of four scripts with consolidated COGA
>>> feedback that we're asking you to review before we send it to EO.
>>>
>>> *Background:*
>>> COGA had a good meeting on Monday with Shadi from EO. He asked us to
>>> submit consolidated feedback via Github, instead of asynchronously filling
>>> out EO's survey. We agreed to his request.
>>>
>>> To meet EO's 9/26 deadline, COGA has spent several hours at TPAC
>>> discussing the 4 EO scripts that involve cognitive and learning
>>> disabilities. We will send each of the 4 scripts out as soon as they are
>>> ready and will try to give you two days to respond to each one.
>>>
>>> *Your input needed by this Thursday at 6pm ET:*
>>> Please review this Preety script
>>> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AvcIlJC11MDBtZi_U2pknWxQrznq5S_p_knc_jjlb2w/edit?usp=sharing>
>>> and use margin comments:
>>>
>>>    - If you have any objections to the changes we’re suggesting in red
>>>    or to the explanations for these changes, or
>>>    - If you think something essential is missing from EO's script
>>>    and/or our feedback.
>>>
>>>
>>> Thanks so much for your flexibility as we hustle to meet EO's very tight
>>> deadline, which is based on the need to finish producing this video series
>>> by the end of the year or else lose the funding for it.
>>>
>>> Thanks again,
>>> Julie
>>>
>>> --
>>>
>>> Julie Rawe
>>>
>>> Special Projects Editor, Editorial Content, Understood
>>>
>>> E: jrawe@understood.org
>>>
>>> Pronounced Joo-lee Raw (like 'uncooked')
>>>
>>> She | her
>>>
>>>
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> Julie Rawe
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> Special Projects Editor, Editorial Content, Understood
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> E: jrawe@understood.org
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> Pronounced Joo-lee Raw (like 'uncooked')
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> She | her
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