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Quick comments on BP2

From: Philipp Hoschka <ph@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 18 Apr 2008 17:24:12 +0200
Message-ID: <4808BD1C.6050005@w3.org>
To: Mobile Web Best Practices Working Group WG <public-bpwg@w3.org>

Hi,

read through BP2 quickly - a few quick comments:

- should try to cite sources for where BPs come from (include in references)
- 5.3.5: "control over application behavior" is a bit generic as BP 
title - is there a way to enumerate which exact application behaviors 
should be controlable? (the text mentions content update schedules, 
memory use, privacy/security options - is that it?)
- 5.4.2.1: What is "user-agent redirect"? I only know redirect in HTTP 
and in HTML - maybe explain?
- 5.5.4.2: explain what "nested CSS classes" are - I saw the original 
mail suggesting this so think I understood, but I'm not sure this is a 
well defined term - maybe give the example from the mail message
- 5.5.5: Minimize DOM Manipulation - the title seems to contradict the 
"how to do it" section, which explains how to use Javascript to insert 
JSON data into a page - which increases DOM manipulation rather than 
reduces it, from what I can tell
- 5.7.2: Retain focus on updates - confusing title - I read it to mean 
to keep the focus on the updated part, which is the contrary to what is 
meant - maybe say "Don't move the focus on updates"
- some typos and wrong linebreaks after links
- font size a little small
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